LOCKED & LOADED (Upper Garage) Mastered & DONE.

[rayc]

Thanks for suggestions and ears folks.
Listens & comments had slowed to a trickle so I stuck a fork in it.



V1
He's locked and loaded as she heads for the door
This battle won at the start of his War
Just shut your mouth or there'll be more
C1
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
The face transformed: the anger the frown
There's no one she knows in this town
There's no escape no where to run
There's nothing
V2
Bags packed and ready because she wants no more
And there's no protection within the law
Can't recall what she wanted him for
C2
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
Lover transformed: to a dangerous clown
He was her king but he battered his crown
There's no escape no where to run
There's nothing
SOLO
C3
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
She's going under and feels like she'll drown
The marks don't fade: they're the talk of the town
There's no escape no where to run
There's nothing
V3
He's all excuses for the heart that he tore
Just one more chance it's like it was before
A bed of roses till there's a thorn
C4
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
The face transformed: the anger the frown
He was her king but he battered his crown
There's no escape no where to run
There's nothing
C5
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
It all imploded: it came crashing down
It wasn't long till it came crashing down
There's no escape no where to run
There's nothing

[TripleM]

Great jangle guitar sound. Great snare sound. I like the bass too.

I think the bass could come up a db or two.

I think the kick could probably come up too.

Maybe nudge down the guitars just a wee bit and nudge up the vocal just a wee bit?

Just my opinion but I thought the drum part was overplayed during the chorus.