The Narcissist's Wife with vomitHatSteve

Your Mom loves your mixes, but are they really up to scratch? Post your tracks here and get the community's feedback to help with the spit and polish. Impress us! We don't bite.
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Ray, I've not had chance to listen to these interims on decent headphones or monitors. But I'll try and have a listen later this arvo or tonight.
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That sounds much better, Ray.
Its lost that feeling that the bottom end is all swirling together.
The kick is a bit innocuous.
Steve sounds better on this and I can pick out what he's saying now - he's always pretty clearly spoken and the previous mix made it hard to pick him out.
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Re-listening to the latest mix, I'm noticing a number of pops (e.g. 2:58 and 3:00) are those mp3 compression or the track?
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@JD[mention]JD01[/mention] James I've cleaned up some of the sub lows of the bass which has made space for the kick - I think @vomitHatSteve, The popping was/is the 12 string - simple bass runs - I've compressed it a little harder so it doesn't POP as much.
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rayc wrote: Sun Dec 08, 2019 12:37 am Sunday, 8th December mix as noted in OP.
Late October20all.mp3
Additional guitar stuff.
I think this is pretty good. I think it could use more "cleaning" in the middle, a little more width and space between the pieces. The middle is pretty jammed with midrange.

Put up a wav and let me have a crack at "mastering" this thing.
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BOTH masters are in the OP for comparison/contrast.
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Ah... I'm late to the party on this! Its already mixed and mastered.

However, it sounds good. I can hear everything Steve is saying now.
The mix sounds good.
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