Disaffected Alt Rock Bass Girl - tryna finalize the mix today

[vomitHatSteve]

Working on a new song. I'm gonna release it on the 1st, which means I have to finalize the mix today.

Somewhat more minimalist and lo-fi than normal because I'm gonna do a bunch of alternate arrangements with different instrumentation over the next two months.

Mix 1

DARBGChauvanistVers.mp3

Unmastered flac version of the most recent mix (probably whatever the highest number above is, but no promises)

[Armistice]

At 6am on my laptop I'm not going to be able to give you any useful feedback I'm afraid, but I do love your song titles!

Look it all sounds pretty much in the right place to me - you could have taken the bass solo on for another couple of bars for effect, I reckon, but it makes the point.

Sounds good to my bleary early morning ears.

[rayc]

Possibly a little muddy for your mixes. The vocals REALLY good and the melody is terrific.

[vomitHatSteve]

Thanks, guys.

Yeah, I can see the mud. Probably should have used a real guitar at some point or something!

[TripleM]

Probably really late on this.

I agree with the mud comment. The bass is pretty muddy. The fuzz guitar is a bit too. A tighter kick sound would be nice.

I like the synth part.

I also agree the vocal is very nice sounding. You could probably bring up the harmony parts.